Trouble Me
Title: Trouble Me
Characters: Anakin/Obi-Wan
Word Count: 932
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Sometimes stubborn insistence yields the most welcome of outcomes.
Author's Notes: Here you go,
buff_iroh. Hehehe. I didn't write it exactly as I think you might have wanted, but I hope you'll enjoy it nonetheless. Oh, and I hope everyone will forgive me my prevalence for run-on sentences and some rather pesky pronouns. Ugh. This is what makes slash such a tough thing for me to write (even if it can be a rather enjoyable endeavor). :)
‘No, Anakin.’
A pout. That damnable pout, on those damnable lips, on that damnable face. Sometimes he believes the pleasures his former Padawan offers would be easier to resist if said former Padawan was not so aesthetically appealing. As if there was nothing else to the force of his desire for the young Jedi.
‘But I want to.’
Obi-Wan heaves the sigh of the long-suffering Master – something he’s perfected in all of the years he has served as mentor to one Anakin Skywalker. He often wonders if Qui-Gon was secretly a Sith, plotting his final revenge in some misguided sense of loyalty to his own former Master.
‘And I don’t,’ he replies, wearily, rubbing his eyes. Anakin’s gaze is heated blue and shaded with unmistakable stubbornness. He doesn’t want to take no as an answer. Fortunately, these days Obi-Wan knows how to twist the blade: ‘Why don’t you go find something in a small, brunette senator to rub up against?’
The growl this elicits sends an involuntary frisson of excitement coursing through Obi-Wan. Quick as a flash, he is on his back on the sofa. Anakin’s insistent grip pins his arms down, his evident arousal grinding against Obi-Wan’s hips in a way that causes him to moan with sudden need.
‘Maybe because I’m in the mood for something of a different flavor,’ Anakin retorts, breath hot against Obi-Wan’s neck as he nuzzles his collarbone. Obi-Wan can hear the grin in his voice.
‘A different flavor?’ Obi-Wan asks, eyebrows lifted in amusement as he submits, plunging his fingers into Anakin’s hair and tugging gently. The latter takes the hint and lifts his head. The self-assured grin is confirmed.
‘What sort of flavor?’ Obi-Wan prods, expectance hanging in the air between them. He wants to hear it, wants to see the words pass that delicious mouth. Anakin knows it, but thankfully this is one arena in which he almost graciously surrenders each and every time.
‘I would like to suck your cock, Master.’
It’s that one word really – not the crude ‘cock’ but rather the deferential ‘Master’ - from which Obi-Wan derives the most pleasure. He blushes in spite of himself, noting the way Anakin lowers his head before waiting for an answer. But then Anakin never waits for an answer.
The beleaguered Master allows the data reader to slip from his hand and drop softly to the floor. His former Padawan’s lips are on the newly-bared skin of his lower abdomen, fingernails clawing lightly as he rakes leggings and underwear down in one single pass.
His cock hardens further under Anakin’s gaze.
That grin again. That kriffing –
And then:
Assuredness guides Anakin’s tongue in broad flicks, using just the right teasing pressure over the entire length of Obi-Wan’s cock before he abruptly swallows him down. His mouth is a haven of moist heat, the voraciousness with which he carries out his self-imposed task rocketing Obi-Wan’s arousal through the roof.
‘Oh… oh, Anakin… slow… down…’ Obi-Wan’s voice is a harsh rasp. His hips set their own rhythm as Anakin relaxes his throat in earnest, opening up to fit the full length of him. He holds there as long as possible before his gag reflex sets in and he comes back up with a gasp, spit threading from his lips to the tip of Obi-Wan’s cock. He pauses just a moment to grin, cheeks flushed with both his efforts and his own excitement.
Anakin’s head of unkempt dark blond curls lowers again and once more Obi-Wan is plunged back into that haven, his cock like durasteel between Anakin’s eager lips. Tongue and teeth (oh dear, so delicious, yesssssss) and the constant push and pull of throat muscles – these prove, in fact, to be the weapons Anakin Skywalker wields far more masterfully than he has ever wielded a lightsaber.
The pace he sets is frantic, the moans in the back of his throat sweeter than any aria Obi-Wan has ever heard at the Galaxies Opera House. The vibrations that rumble through Anakin’s throat add to working Obi-Wan toward that final precipice, and when Anakin wraps his fingers around his cock, stroking in time as he sucks him off, Obi-Wan digs his own into the young man’s hair, bucking shamelessly up into his mouth.
Obi-Wan’s orgasm tears him out of orbit and he’s floating somewhere safe, somewhere beyond peace, beyond even the uncomplicated serenity of the Force. Anakin milks him greedily, swallowing every last drop before the latter collapses back against the sofa in a shivering, sated wreck. Anakin kneels up, the smugness in his expression making Obi-Wan wish he was a younger man, one who could recover far more easily, far more quickly so that he could immediately turn the tables and fuck the smug look off of that gorgeous face, make it turn into one of the purest kind of pleasure the young Jedi Knight could ever hope to experience.
‘Did you enjoy yourself?’ Obi-Wan asks wryly, closing his eyes.
‘Mmm, very much. Thank you, Master.’
Anakin’s voice is in his ear, the full length of his warm body a solid, comforting weight on top of Obi-Wan’s own. When Obi-Wan opens his eyes, Anakin’s are there to greet him. The look of smugness is gone, replaced by that inimitable tenderness Obi-Wan will forever associate with Anakin alone.
‘You are trouble, Anakin Skywalker,’ Obi-Wan murmurs affectionately, reaching up to trace the scar bisecting his right eyebrow.
‘But you love me anyway,’ Anakin replies, gaze aglow. Obi-Wan’s fingers stray to Anakin’s lips. He smiles.
‘Yes, Anakin.’
Characters: Anakin/Obi-Wan
Word Count: 932
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Sometimes stubborn insistence yields the most welcome of outcomes.
Author's Notes: Here you go,
‘No, Anakin.’
A pout. That damnable pout, on those damnable lips, on that damnable face. Sometimes he believes the pleasures his former Padawan offers would be easier to resist if said former Padawan was not so aesthetically appealing. As if there was nothing else to the force of his desire for the young Jedi.
‘But I want to.’
Obi-Wan heaves the sigh of the long-suffering Master – something he’s perfected in all of the years he has served as mentor to one Anakin Skywalker. He often wonders if Qui-Gon was secretly a Sith, plotting his final revenge in some misguided sense of loyalty to his own former Master.
‘And I don’t,’ he replies, wearily, rubbing his eyes. Anakin’s gaze is heated blue and shaded with unmistakable stubbornness. He doesn’t want to take no as an answer. Fortunately, these days Obi-Wan knows how to twist the blade: ‘Why don’t you go find something in a small, brunette senator to rub up against?’
The growl this elicits sends an involuntary frisson of excitement coursing through Obi-Wan. Quick as a flash, he is on his back on the sofa. Anakin’s insistent grip pins his arms down, his evident arousal grinding against Obi-Wan’s hips in a way that causes him to moan with sudden need.
‘Maybe because I’m in the mood for something of a different flavor,’ Anakin retorts, breath hot against Obi-Wan’s neck as he nuzzles his collarbone. Obi-Wan can hear the grin in his voice.
‘A different flavor?’ Obi-Wan asks, eyebrows lifted in amusement as he submits, plunging his fingers into Anakin’s hair and tugging gently. The latter takes the hint and lifts his head. The self-assured grin is confirmed.
‘What sort of flavor?’ Obi-Wan prods, expectance hanging in the air between them. He wants to hear it, wants to see the words pass that delicious mouth. Anakin knows it, but thankfully this is one arena in which he almost graciously surrenders each and every time.
‘I would like to suck your cock, Master.’
It’s that one word really – not the crude ‘cock’ but rather the deferential ‘Master’ - from which Obi-Wan derives the most pleasure. He blushes in spite of himself, noting the way Anakin lowers his head before waiting for an answer. But then Anakin never waits for an answer.
The beleaguered Master allows the data reader to slip from his hand and drop softly to the floor. His former Padawan’s lips are on the newly-bared skin of his lower abdomen, fingernails clawing lightly as he rakes leggings and underwear down in one single pass.
His cock hardens further under Anakin’s gaze.
That grin again. That kriffing –
And then:
Assuredness guides Anakin’s tongue in broad flicks, using just the right teasing pressure over the entire length of Obi-Wan’s cock before he abruptly swallows him down. His mouth is a haven of moist heat, the voraciousness with which he carries out his self-imposed task rocketing Obi-Wan’s arousal through the roof.
‘Oh… oh, Anakin… slow… down…’ Obi-Wan’s voice is a harsh rasp. His hips set their own rhythm as Anakin relaxes his throat in earnest, opening up to fit the full length of him. He holds there as long as possible before his gag reflex sets in and he comes back up with a gasp, spit threading from his lips to the tip of Obi-Wan’s cock. He pauses just a moment to grin, cheeks flushed with both his efforts and his own excitement.
Anakin’s head of unkempt dark blond curls lowers again and once more Obi-Wan is plunged back into that haven, his cock like durasteel between Anakin’s eager lips. Tongue and teeth (oh dear, so delicious, yesssssss) and the constant push and pull of throat muscles – these prove, in fact, to be the weapons Anakin Skywalker wields far more masterfully than he has ever wielded a lightsaber.
The pace he sets is frantic, the moans in the back of his throat sweeter than any aria Obi-Wan has ever heard at the Galaxies Opera House. The vibrations that rumble through Anakin’s throat add to working Obi-Wan toward that final precipice, and when Anakin wraps his fingers around his cock, stroking in time as he sucks him off, Obi-Wan digs his own into the young man’s hair, bucking shamelessly up into his mouth.
Obi-Wan’s orgasm tears him out of orbit and he’s floating somewhere safe, somewhere beyond peace, beyond even the uncomplicated serenity of the Force. Anakin milks him greedily, swallowing every last drop before the latter collapses back against the sofa in a shivering, sated wreck. Anakin kneels up, the smugness in his expression making Obi-Wan wish he was a younger man, one who could recover far more easily, far more quickly so that he could immediately turn the tables and fuck the smug look off of that gorgeous face, make it turn into one of the purest kind of pleasure the young Jedi Knight could ever hope to experience.
‘Did you enjoy yourself?’ Obi-Wan asks wryly, closing his eyes.
‘Mmm, very much. Thank you, Master.’
Anakin’s voice is in his ear, the full length of his warm body a solid, comforting weight on top of Obi-Wan’s own. When Obi-Wan opens his eyes, Anakin’s are there to greet him. The look of smugness is gone, replaced by that inimitable tenderness Obi-Wan will forever associate with Anakin alone.
‘You are trouble, Anakin Skywalker,’ Obi-Wan murmurs affectionately, reaching up to trace the scar bisecting his right eyebrow.
‘But you love me anyway,’ Anakin replies, gaze aglow. Obi-Wan’s fingers stray to Anakin’s lips. He smiles.
‘Yes, Anakin.’

You just have to love Obi-Wan, you can't tell me his heart was in his initial refusal. Me thinks he's a big tease. He knows just how to push Anakin into taking the decision out of Obi-Wan's hands thereby freeing Obi-Wan of any guilt when he gives into his obvious attraction and ATTACHMENT to Anakin.
Not to mention his subtle "victory" over his rival, Padme, when it's clear who Anakin prefers!
I have to say, it might have been just my mood which, as you know tonight, is not the best and is looking for any distraction, that caused this next reaction. However, when Obi-Wan thinks:
"...Obi-Wan is plunged back into that haven, his cock like durasteel between Anakin’s eager lips. Tongue and teeth (oh dear, so delicious, yesssssss) and the constant push and pull of throat muscles – these prove, in fact, to be the weapons Anakin Skywalker wields far more masterfully than he has ever wielded a lightsaber."
I did have a snicker wonder how the confrontation on Mustafar would have ended had Anakin wielded this particular weapon at that time!!
Finally, I LOVED the closing of the storyline, and the connection between Anakin and Obi-Wan with the "No, Anakin" opening line, and the "Yes, Anakin" closing line. Lovely.
{{HUGGLES}} for the much needed, and appreciated, distraction tonight!!!!
But you just know this made me giggle:
Not to mention his subtle "victory" over his rival, Padme, when it's clear who Anakin prefers!
Bwahahaha. Not quite, but you keep reaching for the stars! ;p
♥
‘But you love me anyway,’
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That sums them up for me in a nutshell.
Loved it, thank you.
:)
Great work, M!
(As would Obi-Wan in my ideal little universe. Mmmmm. ♥)
Thank you for reading! XD
Absolutely perfect characterization and damn, does that sum that ship up-
‘You are trouble, Anakin Skywalker,’ Obi-Wan murmurs affectionately, reaching up to trace the scar bisecting his right eyebrow.
‘But you love me anyway,’ Anakin replies, gaze aglow. Obi-Wan’s fingers stray to Anakin’s lips. He smiles.
‘Yes, Anakin.’
Yum. Yum. Yum!
Mmmm.
Hehehee. Thanks for reading! XD
You write these little fics so incredibly well. You just capture these two so perfectly. And those last three spoken lines are just....THEM. Completely. Banter and love and cocky Anakin in equal measures.
*Happy sigh* That was a wonderful thing to find this morning, thank you! :)
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. :D It was a fun thing to write, particularly in the middle of many other heavier pieces that I'm working on. And from an A/O afficianado such as yourself, I definitely respect your opinion on such things between these two. Hehehe.
♥
(icon twins sorta!)
Good job.
Thank you so much! :D
Um...you know, I think it's one single line of THIS KIND that forces a fangirl like me to have really nasty thoughts about these two Jedi... ! *laughs*
And I did like both the middle part that's most high-rated and the ending that's kind of fluffy/mushy. Yes, I really DID !
Well, Arigatoh for sharing this one ! :D
Sakura
PS. I heard that the TV mini-series of Clone Wars have already been aired over there in America for some time.... Is it true ? *blinks* :{
Thank you for reading and for your very sweet comments. ♥
(Oh, yes, the Clone Wars have aired 15 episodes so far in North America. I hope Japan gets the show soon if it hasn't aired there yet!)
Oh. WAIt. Excuse me.
Is this the..
IS THIS...
HOLY... SHIT.
Obi-Wan heaves the sigh of the long-suffering Master – something he’s perfected in all of the years he has served as mentor to one Anakin Skywalker.
YEs, I like where this is going.
He often wonders if Qui-Gon was secretly a Sith,
....I love you.
He doesn’t want to take no as an answer.
Oh, fuck, Anakin.
‘Maybe because I’m in the mood for something of a different flavor,’
OH. YEAH.
‘Oh… oh, Anakin… slow… down…’
Now I'm positive that you *know* me because I have such an intense kink for an uncontrollable Anakin who goes far too fast and hard.
Tongue and teeth (oh dear, so delicious, yesssssss) and the constant push and pull of throat muscles – these prove, in fact, to be the weapons Anakin Skywalker wields far more masterfully than he has ever wielded a lightsaber.
nnnnnnnnnnnn. <- The sound of me orgasming. Thanks.
WELL. HOLD ON LET ME CATCH MY BREATH. THAT was amazing. I should have known you'd make the most delicious goddamn obi/ani ficlet ever. Damn that was some tasty action. Once again, I owe you a master piece of threesome porn to repay you for this ridiculous gift of hotness.
P.S. Trouble Me is hottest mother@#%&*ing title, okay.
Thank you for your sweet sweet comments! ♥
Ooooh, threesome porn. Mmmmm. I await the results with joyful anticipation.
(Oh, and the title of the piece just sprung to mind, but I probably ultimately ripped it off of the 10,000 Maniacs song of the same name. Tee hee.)
ART FOR YOU, MY SWEET
SO ITS NOT AS PORNY AS I WANTED IT TO BE. BUT... I FEEL LIKE DRAWING PORN OF THEM NOW, SO THATS A GOOD THING.
And YES, Anakin's mouth was made for such wondrous pleasures. Hehehee.
Thank you so much! ♥
One might think...*bites lip, grins wickedly*
...Ya sure you're clear on who your OTP is?
'CAUSE IT SURE AS SHIT LOOKS LIKE IT'S AO, LOLOL. YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!
Chere, you really may need to do some soul-searching, bc HELLO HOTNESS. Hello snarky hot blowjobs and wicked naughty words and OMG THE BANTER.
I love how you not only made me DIE laughing (Qui-Gon the Sith--fucking A), but you also made it hot, endearing, and loverly all at the same time.
'BUT I WANT TO'.
And that? That pretty much sums up Anakin Skywalker's personal sex philosophy.
I won't re-quote what everyone else has singled out, but the image of them at the end with Anakin pressed full-length against Obi-Wan? *sighhhh* Divine.
*grins sassy* Ya really should rethink your fic priorities, cherie. 'BECAUSE I WANT [YOU] TO'.
Delicious as usual, and my paltry thanks are not nearly enough!
I thought the OTP thing too.
(hehehe)
This was surprisingly really pretty easy for me to write in such a short time-frame. But watch out, L, because pretty soon this journal is going to be inundated with a slew of A/P fics, since I only have about EIGHT of them in various stages. Hehehehe. Oh, and of course a couple of threesome pieces.
YOU WILL ENJOY IT ALL. YOU 'WANT TO'. I COMMAND IT. ♥♥♥♥♥
And the cute cuddling at the end is so nice too, in a completely different way. :)
Thank you so much! XD
‘Did you enjoy yourself?’ Obi-Wan asks wryly, closing his eyes.
‘Mmm, very much. Thank you, Master.’
Well, kinda. XD
This was a great little piece, Em. And lol, yes, slash pronouns are difficult.
EXACTLY, Nic. We both know who's actually in charge here. Yessssss.
Thank you, sweetness! Yes, fuck, I hate the pronoun game!
♥♥
And Obi-Wan ... I've mentioned I love your Obi-Wan right? Even my mad love for Ewan can't completely overcome the watching-paint-dry factor for me when viewing the PT. You write him in a way that seems completely true to PT Obi-Wan, but at the same time so damn compelling and layered and conflicted.
And this ...
‘I would like to suck your cock, Master.’
It’s that one word really – not the crude ‘cock’ but rather the deferential ‘Master’ - from which Obi-Wan derives the most pleasure. He blushes in spite of himself, noting the way Anakin lowers his head before waiting for an answer. But then Anakin never waits for an answer.
OMG, that's fucking hawt, even if I'm not into A/O. Damn you, M! Damn you! I don't need another 'ship.
I love that you read this and left such awesome comments (as ever) even though you're not into the pairing. :p Thank you so so much!! ♥